Friday, June 4, 2010

Encouragement (hopefully)

I do like the things that are going on here on this blog.
Keep up the posts!

No one but me can edit colors and settings and things.
Suggestions are welcome.
I'm currently taking submissions for the "description" section of our blog.
It should say a little something (hopefully in an articulate fashion) about what we are all about and what this blog is all about. The description will go right under the title of our blog. Whatever it is, it should be brief and beautiful. Comment with suggestions please!

Anyone who wants to post but doesn't have permission, just give me your email and I'll let you in so you can start posting!

Wednesday, June 2, 2010

the lost finale

i know that a couple of you follow lost, so i figured i'd throw my proverbial hat in the ring and share some of my thoughts on the series finale.

but before that, some background.

i've recently renewed my love of reading, especially fiction, and found a new focus within that, specifically with russian literature.  my exploration has found me beginning bakhtin's "problems of dostoevsky's poetics," which is a philosophically oriented literary critique of what bakhtin believed to be the factor which made dostoevsky's novels stand out: namely, the concept of a polyphonic novel.

to the best of my understanding so far, bakhtin believes that the ultimate aim of a novel is to present and reflect the "polyphonic" (which means many-voiced), multi-centered nature of both the world and ourselves.  he posits that we do not live in some sort of vacuum, and that our own voices and natures are amalgamations and interpretations of the many others present around us.  we affect our world and are affected by it.

bakhtin believed that dostoevsky created his works by refusing to condense the individual worlds and voices of his characters into or under a singular narrative voice, thus creating not the classical aristotelian "closed" text, but an open one, where his characters fully existed in an ultimately unfinalizable world, a world of the dialogical, constantly developing "we" over the monological, narrow "i."

returning to lost, i didn't like the ending.

it's not that it wasn't exciting, or well written, or illuminating enough.  it's just that the nature of a series finale, in my opinion, is essentially compromising to a series like lost.

the show was never really about the island.  it was about the people.  the lives of jack, kate, sawyer, hugo, locke, sayid, ben, claire, sun and jin, and all the others were the points of references for the whole series, and the dynamic effects of their lives and the island on each others' was what made the show so compelling.  each character existed as a means to his or her own end.  they were never compressed into a monologic narrative; rather the writing chose to show that each character inhabited and experienced his or her own world, with the joys and struggles within it.

in short, lost was a polyphonic television show.  lost, while keeping us amused with science fiction, conspiracy theories, and international intrigue was at its core a show about people, and more than that, about people together, trying to make sense of the world and themselves within it.  it reflected life, it its own way.

and to be honest, i have to applaud the implication at the very end in the church that their stories really never did end.  the ones who survived kept on living, but their lives remained connected as they prepared for whatever would come next, even after death.  ending the island's story without necessarily ending the character's story was still nothing short of a remarkable feat.

i don't regret watching lost, because as in life, it's the adventures and the relationships that count.  there's no ending to lost that could have done the journey justice.

but i'll tell you, they gave it a hell of a sendoff.

Monday, May 31, 2010

A Peom to Consider

In hopes of making a clean slate, here is something else for us to focus on besides my ridiculous mishaps on In this Together.

When I lived in City House (Beaver Falls, PA) I met a great neighborhood kid named James (some of you know him). He was often in trouble and seemed to have a lot of pent up aggression. He came into the house one night when I was writing poetry and I asked if he wanted to join me. It was the sweetest thing I ever heard to hear him say yes. This is what he wrote:

Big and brown with busted windows,
it sounds silent.
The burnt pieces of
the house felt light
it smelled like something was
burning, there was lots of broken pieces
of glass with
creaking steps

by: James

He never got to finish it.

Sunday, May 30, 2010

to caitlin

hey, the whole tegan and sara thing was not from me. if i had to guess, it was probably rob. but it's okay.

i'll try to put up something later.

Friday, May 21, 2010

Sorry, Adam: here's his idea for post #1

My apologies to Adam. I accidentally deleted his post. He posted the two versions of this Tegan and Sara song for us to consider which we think is better. Im not saying it as nicely as he did, but maybe he'll come fix it. In the meantime, here are the two versions to consider. Let's get this thing rolling (and I promise not to delete any more posts--Im learning. But this is my first time on a blog, after all).

Tiƫsto feat. Tegan & Sara - Feel It In My Bones

Tegan and Sara: "Feel it In My Bones" (acoustic) - A Take Away Show